I like your poem! I now know more about you, and I think it's cool that you care about your family so much. You love to dance and you are honest in your poem. Good job!
I actually learned quite a few things from you from reading this lovely poem. All that I know from you that is mentioned in this poem is about dance. I didn't hesitate to read this at all. My feel for this, is that poetry is for you because all of this in my point of view is so deep and meaningful. You are very close to your family as I now know because of the last stanza in the poem. I love how you can about many people. You are a great person. Outstanding job with this poem!
I really like your poem. I really learned much about you like how close you are to your parents. You're poem is also very real, like I could tell that you were writing it from the heart, and not just writing another assignment. Great Job!
I like your poem! I now know more about you, and I think it's cool that you care about your family so much. You love to dance and you are honest in your poem. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI actually learned quite a few things from you from reading this lovely poem. All that I know from you that is mentioned in this poem is about dance. I didn't hesitate to read this at all. My feel for this, is that poetry is for you because all of this in my point of view is so deep and meaningful. You are very close to your family as I now know because of the last stanza in the poem. I love how you can about many people. You are a great person. Outstanding job with this poem!
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ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. I really learned much about you like how close you are to your parents. You're poem is also very real, like I could tell that you were writing it from the heart, and not just writing another assignment. Great Job!
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Beautifully written - you need to share this with your mom!
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